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Monday, July 5, 2021

Treehouse Descriptive Writing

Hello readers and welcome back to my blog,
Today I will be sharing with you my tree house descriptive writing. We had to go on our resource book or thesaurus or google to find some describing words. I am really proud of my work. Here it is and I hope you like it. 

It was dark and it was 4 in the morning, when I finished brushing my teeth in the pond I made a little fire for the food that I would find. I went for a long wander and I saw a big, ancient treehouse in the massive trees. I heard silence so I wanted to go in but I didn’t know how to. I started to get a little creeped out so I wandered around, I finally saw an entrance. There was a petty door but it was closed. I knocked on the scrubby door and it opened by itself! I was really getting creeped out. I used all my energy to get into the shrimpy little door. I shuffled in and there were no people. There was a frazzled old couch and hoary curtains. There were sticky and decomposed fruits from the animals that had been in the treehouse. My dark brown eyes could see a wooden table with a wooden chair. The table and chairs had scratches and knife marks on them. There were nightmarish spiders and spider webs on the corners of the treehouse. It was really icy because of the cold air. The crown of the treehouse was really furry so the rain would infuse in. The wood was dusky and drenched because of all the rain that got in. There was a picture above the frazzled couch with 2 men. They were wearing cowboy hats and had fishing rods. They had big dirty boots and their clothes were wet and dirty. I continued peeping around. After a while I got out of the tree house and continued hunting for food. I found a dead deer. There were so many flies around the deer's eyes. I got out my special small knife and cut the deer. I got a perfect amount of deer for myself. I scurried back to my tent and I roasted the raw deer over the fire. I patiently waited, after a while the deer was cooked. I bit, chewed, and swallowed the food. I really liked it so it was really worth it. It was really hard to find it because it was a half an hour walk. It was getting dark and I already forgot about the treehouse so I drowsed to sleep. I was ready for the next adventure tomorrow.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Sadiyah,
    This is a good post. There nothing to say about this post. But hope you have a good holiday!

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  2. Kia ora Sadiyah,
    I really liked you post your describing words are amazing have a nice day bye.

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