Hello readers and welcome back to my blog. The whole class had to use their senses and they had to use it on a raisin. We had to smell it, hear it, feel it, see, and taste it. Here is my story. Hop you like it. Feel free to ask any questions, please give me some advice if you have some.
Mrs Mclachlan is unwrapping the big raisin box and I know that it is plastic, it is so annoying and painful. The shake of the box sounds like little mice wanting to get out. The opening of the box sounds like 2 quick clicks. I have a raisin in my hand right now. It looks like a small kid's pancake because it is not a perfect circle. It is brown and red-ish like Autumn leaves. It is really lumpy and squishy too. It smells like oil. It feels lumpy, squishy, small and wrinkly. It is soft as a pillow. I want to squeeze everything out of it but I can’t. Mrs Mclachlan said we can eat it after we smelt it, heard it, saw it and felt it. It tastes like sweet candy, it is really sweet.
What a wonderful description Sadiya.
ReplyDeleteYou've used lots of adjectives and that has made your story more interesting.It is so simple.Just by adding some plain words it makes a story worth reading.
I'm curious as to what you would of heard from a raisin.
Was it saying "Eat me.Eat me?".
I do find raisins very sticky.I often give them to my bird in the small boxes and he throws them all around his cage.
Some even land on the floor and we end up standing on them.