Tuesday, May 26, 2020
returning to school
Hi guys, I am going to share with you my first draft about Returning To School. My writing is about how I was feeling going back to school. I am really happy about my writing but is there anything that I can improve in my writing?
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question
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WOW Sadiya!
ReplyDeleteYou have remember a lot about the first day back.The teachers at the gate,have to make sure that any adults who come into the school,sign the book.Hopefully it won't be too long before school starts finishing at 3 again.
Did you enjoy joining in with the game of Elastics today?.It was great to have so many children want to play.
Yes I get the picture of her trying to remember every little detail as day goes by to write in her blog. So clever. It’s something I wish I could do when I was little. She puts a smile on my face every time with her writing. Such good job. And I am so glad that I finally get to see her work.
DeleteHello Sadiya.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Sadiya.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.