returning to school

Hi guys, I am going to share with you my first draft about Returning To School. My writing is about how I was feeling going back to school. I am really happy about my writing but is there anything that I can improve in my writing?

Corona Virus

Hello readers and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking about the Corona Virus but if you don’t want to hear about those things, you don’t have to. So I am pretty sure most people around the world are on a Lockdown but if I’m wrong then I don’t know because I am. Anyways people are getting really sick, I knew that when it was February and that time we weren’t at Christchurch. But it’s not about when I knew about it. I just don’t like how it’s spreading all around the world. It’s just so bad. When I watch YouTube I see people talking about it and they say that they are also on Lockdown. It’s kind of good because we still get to go outside and play. “Please stay safe.” everyone says. So please also listen to them. New Zealand has over 1000 cases now so it’s getting really bad. Don’t worry I do care about the other countries. Like my favourite aunt is living in Australia and they have lots of cases and I am worried about them because there's no Lockdown.

WAREHOUSE!!!

Hi people, I have been writing this story so I can get better at my writing skills.
It's about Warehouse. Hope you enjoy. 10/3/20. Warehouse!!!                                             

Yesterday me, my little sister, my mum and Aunty went to the Warehouse!!! We went
there so we could buy house things for our new house. We only needed two trolleys
because if we didn't have anything at our old house we needed more than 3 or 4
trolleys but we didn't. All our stuff is hopefully going to come on Thursday or Friday.
I can't wait!!! I wanted something to play with at our new house so we kept asking
our mum for some colouring and writing stuff. My sister nearly cried because she
couldn't find any cheap writing stuff. First we saw some LOLS but they were $25
and $19, they were too expensive. My aunty and mum had enough money to buy the
house stuff though. But we found some cheap stuff so we’re lucky. My little sister
found a writing thing that has 2 paper clips, a note writing thing, a pencil, a drawing
thing and a writing book. Her one is cool but I got this art thing that has different
colour gems and glitter so I think my one is better than hers. I'm not going to let
her use it because she is just going to waste all the glitter and she'll want  to use
all the gems. I'm not going to open my art thing until we move into the rented house.

Personal and Private

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